I’m writing a revenge story. This guy or girl comes from a rich family. Their dad is a doctor and their mom is a lawyer. The kid is in their 20s and is a drug addict. Their family cut them off because of it.

The dealer kills them because they couldn’t pay the money they owed. Then a loved one goes after the dealer for revenge.

Is this good? I didn’t want to overcomplicate it by giving it a huge conspiracy, but at the same time, realistically, couldn’t they have gotten the money some other way?

      • vvvvan@lemmy.world
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        5 天前

        Define “alive”. Seems like his brain was replaced with whatever the fuck Grok is.

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        6 天前

        Yeah his drugs of choice are of the “talked to Sauron and tweak out on the internet” schedule that you have to take a lot of to get any organ damage. But maybe we’ll get lucky and somebody will lace his shit one day.

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        6 天前

        While we all wish he would die early, unfortuntely we don’t actually know how heavy his usage is. We hype any percieved ailment to the moon like Trump’s usually non-lethal skin cancer. Hard to catch something late when these bastards have doctors on retainer.