DavidFriedland
These stories are mine.
They’re drawn from my own life, observations, and experiences.
And many times, I write of the odd way I see the world.
Most often I turn them into a story, once in a while, a song.
Enjoy your stay, but don’t expect the expected, because, most often, I don’t see things that way…
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Felix just got himself another like on YT.
Thanks!
That’s an impressive amount of certainty about a life he’s never lived.
He doesn’t know whose hand the man has held, what he’s lost, who he’s loved, what he’s given, or what he’s done when nobody was watching.
Yet somehow he’s appointed himself qualified to measure another man’s humanity.
That’s the irony here.
He wrote an entire paragraph about compassion while demonstrating none.
He wrote about love while using it as a weapon.
And he condemned someone for thinking only of himself while never once considering that he might be wrong.
If this is his demonstration of what it means to be human, he may want to choose a different example.
You speak of her fondly. And knowing that her ‘judgmentalness’ is increasing as time goes on, she’s perfect!
Molly is beautiful!
Turn back the clock, and my Ginnie looked exactly like your Molly.
Be advised, if you think she judges now, just wait till she gets her formal robes! (Meaning her darker color.)
And if she’s anything like ours, she’ll love you just as much as she judges you.
Must be a fine looking gent!
This is me, as I’ve intended to be seen.
You’ve invested time to pursue something you’re not interested in, and in representation of the “community”?
Now that is a discussion worthy topic. 🕵️
As always, I will watch the community’s voting trend determine the perceived value of the content.
You actually got me thinking.
If I set up a Patreon where I posted both versions—the raw poetry exactly as I originally wrote it, alongside the finished version after I used the language learning model to polish it up—would you be interested enough in seeing that process to subscribe?
I’d be happy to put in the extra time to make something like that available if there were enough genuine interest to make the effort worthwhile.
From my profile:
The stories are mine. They’re drawn from my own life, observations, and experiences. The strange way I see the world.
The language learning model (AI) doesn’t invent them—it simply helps me turn those stories into poetry. Think of it like using a ruler. I can draw a pretty straight line by hand, but if I already know exactly where I want the line, why not use the ruler?
Thank you!
Haha, thank you! That is the highest compliment a writer can get.
Thank you!
He certainly acts like it when he goes flying around the living room (zoomies).
Absolutely, ask him to hit me up when the show’s over.
In a perfect world, such a life
Outdoor freedom and chasing mice.
However, in the area, which I live
Only one guarantee I could give.
Turkey vultures, Hawks, and more
They spend their lives as prey and not much more.
So for now, they’ll take their window scene, and afternoon trips to the backyard catio (16’x8’) in between.