• Skeezix@lemmy.world
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    2 days ago

    The ceo grudgingly agreed to hold off on his 15 million dollar bonus for a few years so that they can lower the prices.

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      Unrealistic fiction. You have to make your characters more believable. Ex: The ceo begrudgingly thought about someone besides a shareholder for approximately 3 seconds, farted, then signed an agreement to kill another grandmother.